Thursday, February 19, 2009

My views on my paper

I had a hard time phrasing what it was that made Hannah such a difficult person to be with. There were two things that went wrong with our friendship. One was that Hannah would often mistreat me as a friend, and really munipulate me. They other problem was Hannah's parents never taking charge of Hannah. I didn't know how to phrase what I learned because I guess what I did learn was that our friendship didn't work. I didn't want put that in my paper because I felt like then why did i write it. The only reason I could think of was why I wrote it was because of how imporant she was in my life for a while. How unblieveably creative she was and how she brought that out of me. As much as I wrote about the bad things I really wanted to end the paper on how amazing she was.

My favorite parts of my paper is about the imaginary games we would play. They truely were one of my most favorite memories of my childhood. As crazy and hectice as her life was she was amazing in her creativety. I guess that is the point I wanted to get across in my paper. I wanted to make this paper funny, but at the same time sad because of her hard family life. I had a hard time deciding weather I wanted to put what was really happening in her family life into my paper. Her Dad was mentally Ill, her mom was never home, she was always doing business trips. Her sister got engaged by 18 and was a model, who could have had an eating disorder. Hannah was stuck in all of this. I felt like I got across how hard it was for her and how she looked for my family and her creativety as an outlet.

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