I learned from my peer evaluator that I'm going to need a lot of work on my grammar. Most of my papers do. I could definitely see where he was coming from when he said that some times my sentences didn't flow together. Often when I write a paper I have a lot of different ideas and I just put them all down and they sometimes don't flow together. I plan on making my paper sound more like I am just telling a story to someone. Something my peer evaluator though was that my conclusion needed to be put more through out my paper. I love my conclusion, but I did have a hard time bringing it all together with my paper.
My peer evaluator liked the development through out the story and how it had a clear transitions. He said that he like the development of the characters relationships. I agreed. I thought that it was important to see all the different levels of Hannah and I relationship. If any thing I'm glad he came away from this story seeing that.
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